Wednesday, October 26, 2011

They Say I Say


Mackenzie Goss
WRT 150
Professor Rinke
10-24-11
Dave Eggers discusses in the article, “Serve or Fail,” that all college students in a four-year university should be required to fulfill community service hours. He believes strongly in community service. He also discusses how college students have a lot more time on their hands then they did when they were in high school and feels that the extra time should be used doing community service. His last main point in the article states that community service transforms a person. The person will most likely walk away changed and willing to volunteer in the future.
The thesis or summary of the article would be that college students should volunteer because it is a life long lesson. If every college students had to volunteer, the thousands of towns and cities could be helped out a lot because of the volunteers. I feel that Dave Eggers shows his opinion and bias in this article. He did a lot of community service while he was in college and feels that he transformed because of it. He truly believes in community service and feels like everyone should be required to do it.
The editorial, “Service Learning More than a Fad”, discusses many reasons why Minnesota’s colleges should be apart of service learning. This service learning could include students and faculty, leaving campus to tutor or mentor younger students, deliver meals to the homebound or coach would-be entrepreneurs. One of the main points to this article is that students learn better when they are learning through real-world activities. The last thing that the article argues is that people have lost the sense that everyone can contribute and help out around the community.
The summary or thesis from this article is that service learning is important. It helps people learn through hands on experiences and gives people the opportunity to make a difference and be involved with the community. The author uses persuasive techniques in their writing by pathos. She makes the reader feel like it is their duty to contribute to the community and get involved.
In the third article, “How to reduce student dropout rates: link volunteering to studies”, by the Monitor's Editorial Board says that volunteering can decrease student dropout rates. The second point made in this article is that service learning is linked with academic instruction and students can reflect on a certain project. The final point made in the article is that service learning can help students relate their schoolwork to the real world and will keep students wanting to go to school.
The summary or thesis of this article is that service learning can ultimately decrease dropout rates by keeping the students engaged with learning and their schoolwork. The author uses logos to persuade the audience. The author uses a ton of statistics that could get the reader thinking about how well service learning works and how it decreases drop out rates.
If the authors of each article came together the main thesis would be that volunteering could potentially benefit the person and the community. They may also agree that service learning directly relates learning with real world experiences. Lastly, they may agree that volunteering/service learning should be required for all students. I agree with the fact that volunteering could change a person. People who do not experience volunteering may not understand what it is like to help out a community or people in bad situations. I do not agree that students should be required to complete community service hours. No matter if someone is a high school student or a college student, everyone has their own schedules and most people are busy. They should not have to take time off of work, sports, or other activities to volunteer.
I would have to say that the authors talk about basically the same topics. They all discuss how it is beneficial for students to be involved in service learning or volunteering. They may disagree on the age that students should be required to start service learning or volunteering because two articles talk about it being required in college and the other article thinks its beneficial at an even early age such as high school.

Thursday, October 13, 2011

Advice to Self


Dear Mackenzie,
You and your best friend, Alexis, have been best friends for over seven years now. I know that middle school is a big change and that both of you are meeting new friends. This is a very good thing that you are branching out and meeting new people, but you must remember who has always been there for you. While, Alexis might be hanging out with new friends she will always have time for you. Even though she may make you angry at times you must always make time for her. Alexis has always been there for you through the ups and downs and she knows you better than anybody. Even when your emotions get the best of you, you must always make time for Lex. You may get angry and think that she is blowing you off for her new friends, but in her eyes you are doing the same thing to her.
I know that both of you have different friend groups, but I think you should be the bigger person and not leave anybody out. This means for you to invite Alexis and her friends to hangout with you and your friends. Trust me, you will soon realize that in high school the petty little cliques will disappear and everyone will become friends with everyone. Might as well start becoming friends with everyone now. If you are worried about what your new friends will think about the other girls and worried about if they make you choose, choose Alexis because she has always been your true friend.
Did you ever think you would be hurting her feelings if you left her out? She probably would be very upset with you. Being left out is not a good feeling. You should be mature enough to realize who your true friends are and who will always be there for you.
Yes, every friendship has its good share of fights, but do not let one fight ruin your whole friendship. If you ever get into a fight make sure u are calm and willing to listen. It is extremely important for you not to act defensive and blame everything on the other person. Listen to what she has to say, and be willing to compromise. Admit what you have done wrong and hopefully she would admit what she has done wrong too.
You know that sooner or later you will start to miss Alexis, no matter what new friends she has made. You guys had so many good times together and told each other everything. You can’t just throw all of that away for some new friends. It’s not a bad thing to have a lot of friends, just don’t forget about the old.
This whole situation could have been avoided if you both decided to keep in touch and make the effort to try and get both new groups of friends to hangout with each other. Alexis would have been very understanding and willing to want to make new friends and I know you would have wanted the same. Don’t be afraid to speak up.
Is a little fight/separation truly worth losing your best friend for two years? It definitely is not. Even, if both of you make mistakes, true friends will always stay together and make a friendship last. Please think about what truly matters and consider other people’s feelings first. I wouldn’t want you to regret losing a best friend for a little while, or even worse, forever!
Sincerely,
Yourself